Minor README improvements

README.md

@@ -16,11 +16,10 @@
 
 [中文 README](README.zh.md)
 
-Hysteria is a TCP relay & SOCKS5/HTTP proxy tool optimized for poor network environments (satellite networks,
+Hysteria is a TCP relay & SOCKS5/HTTP proxy tool optimized for networks of poor quality (e.g. satellite connections,
-connections from China to foreign servers, etc.) powered by a custom version of QUIC protocol.
+congested public Wi-Fi, connecting from China to servers abroad) powered by a custom version of QUIC protocol.
 
-It is essentially a spiritual successor of my previous (now abandoned)
+It is essentially a spiritual successor of my abandoned project https://github.com/dragonite-network/dragonite-java
-project https://github.com/dragonite-network/dragonite-java
 
 ## Installation
 
@@ -31,8 +30,8 @@ project https://github.com/dragonite-network/dragonite-java
 
 ## Quick Start
 
-Note: The configs provided in this section are only for people to get started quickly and may not meet your needs.
+Note: This is only a bare-bones example to get the server and client running. Go to [Advanced usage](#advanced-usage)
-Please go to [Advanced usage](#advanced-usage) to see all the available options and their meanings.
+for all the available options.
 
 ### Server
 
@@ -49,15 +48,16 @@ Create a `config.json` under the root directory of the program:
 }
 ```
 
-A TLS certificate (not necessarily issued by a trusted CA) is required on the server side.
+A TLS certificate is required on the server side. It does not have to be valid and trusted, but in that case the clients
+need additional configuration.
 
 The (optional) `obfs` option obfuscates the protocol using the provided password, so that it is not apparent that this
 is Hysteria/QUIC, which could be useful for bypassing DPI blocking or QoS. If the passwords of the server and client do
 not match, no connection can be established. Therefore, this can also serve as a simple password authentication. For
 more advanced authentication schemes, see `auth` below.
 
-`up_mbps` and `down_mbps` limit the maximum upload and download speed of the server for each client. These are also
+`up_mbps` and `down_mbps` limit the maximum upload and download speed of the server for each client. Feel free to remove
-optional and can be removed if not needed.
+them if you don't need.
 
 To launch the server, simply run
 
@@ -95,19 +95,19 @@ Same as the server side, create a `config.json` under the root directory of the
 ```
 
 This config enables a SOCKS5 proxy (with both TCP & UDP support), an HTTP proxy, and a TCP relay to `123.123.123.123:22`
-at the same time. Please modify or remove these entries depending on your actual needs.
+at the same time. Please modify or remove these entries according to your actual needs.
 
 If your server certificate is not issued by a trusted CA, you need to specify the CA used
 with `"ca": "/path/to/file.ca"` on the client or use `"insecure": true` to ignore all certificate errors (not
 recommended).
 
-`up_mbps` and `down_mbps` are mandatory on the client side. Please try to fill in these values as accurately as possible
+`up_mbps` and `down_mbps` are mandatory on the client side. Try to fill in these values as accurately as possible
-according to your network conditions. They are crucial for Hysteria to work in an optimal state.
+according to your network conditions, as they are crucial for Hysteria to work optimally.
 
 Some users may attempt to forward other encrypted proxy protocols such as Shadowsocks with relay. While this technically
 works, it's not optimal from a performance standpoint - Hysteria itself uses TLS, considering that the proxy protocol
 being forwarded is also encrypted, and the fact that almost all sites are now using HTTPS, it essentially becomes triple
-encryption. If you need a proxy, just use our proxy modes.
+encryption. If you need a proxy, just use our proxy mode.
 
 ## Comparison
 

README.zh.md

@@ -14,10 +14,10 @@
 
 [6]: https://t.me/hysteria_github
 
-Hysteria 是专门针对恶劣网络环境（常见于卫星网络、在中国连接国外服务器等）进行优化的 TCP 连接转发和代理工具（即所谓的双边加速），
+Hysteria 是专门针对恶劣网络环境进行优化的 TCP 连接转发和代理工具（双边加速），比如卫星网络、拥挤的公共 Wi-Fi、在中国连接国外服务器等。
 基于修改版的 QUIC 协议。
 
-可以理解为是我此前弃坑的项目 https://github.com/dragonite-network/dragonite-java 的续作。
+是我此前弃坑的项目 https://github.com/dragonite-network/dragonite-java 的续作。
 
 ## 下载安装
 
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ Hysteria 是专门针对恶劣网络环境（常见于卫星网络、在中国
 
 ## 快速入门
 
-注意：本节提供的配置只是为了快速上手，可能无法满足你的需求。请到 [高级用法](#高级用法) 中查看所有可用选项及其含义。
+注意：本节提供的配置只是为了快速上手，可能无法满足你的需求。请到 [高级用法](#高级用法) 中查看所有可用选项与含义。
 
 ### 服务器
 
@@ -45,9 +45,9 @@ Hysteria 是专门针对恶劣网络环境（常见于卫星网络、在中国
 }
 ```
 
-服务端必须要一个 TLS 证书（但并非一定要受信 CA 签发的）。
+服务端需要一个 TLS 证书，但未必一定要是有效、可信的。（只是在这种情况下客户端需要进行额外的配置）
 
-`obfs` 选项使用提供的密码对协议进行混淆，这样协议就不容易被检测出是 Hysteria/QUIC，可以用来绕过针对性的 DPI 屏蔽或者 QoS。
+可选的 `obfs` 选项使用提供的密码对协议进行混淆，这样协议就不容易被检测出是 Hysteria/QUIC，可以用来绕过针对性的 DPI 屏蔽或者 QoS。
 如果服务端和客户端的密码不匹配就不能建立连接，因此这也可以作为一个简单的密码验证。对于更高级的验证方案请见下文 `auth`。
 
 `up_mbps` 和 `down_mbps` 限制服务器对每个客户端的最大上传和下载速度。这些也是可选的，如果不需要可以移除。